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I'm fighting an "Anonymous".
You're not my greatest fan.
You type away in the comments box
Unfair words, when you can.
Too ashamed to leave your name,
Yet like to leave insults.
I wonder if you'd have the guts
To let me judge your faults.
But no, you wouldn't dare,
For it's likely I would mock.
Nevermind "Anonymous".
I think you're a fucking cock.
posted by Kate @ 1:02 pm
7 Comments:
Ok you got me.. I like this one!!!
A very nice little poem, it get to the point in a fun way and I am always glad find someone having fun with poetry.
Thought it was great until I read the last line - I found that offensive, but the sentiment behind it I completely understand!
God Bless.
Dear Kate,
Anonymity does smack of cowardice sometimes, particularly when someone us dissing your site. Personally, I like your site. Your poems are good. They're nothing like the drivel on www.ahoyusblartsnart.blogspot.com. Ahoyus Blartsnart is a freak show, and should be shut down! Your poetry, on the other hand, has a good rhythm to it. Yours rhymes, too, which makes it much more of a challenge than, say, free verse, because you have to fit a certain number of syllables in per line, and each line not only has to have the right rhythm, but also has to make sense. Those two goals are not always compatible. So your particular brand of poetry is a challenge, one to which you've risen well, in my opinion.
Sincerely,
Anti-Blartsnart
perfect
*grins*
get of my case!
Could I quote you on my art page? I would link back to your blog of course, it just really hits the point and I think people there would appreciate the fun of it seeing as anonymous rages around there too!
Let me know!
thanks!
ahh, i must compleatly agree. i am a student blogger, and i'm often faced with anoymous commenters, cowardly bagging my blog. you are alot stronger than i am, as you leave such comments on your blog for all too see, i delete im afraid. your poetery is awesome,if you wish check out my blog, leave a comment if pssible.
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